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For anyone who doesn't know the song, here's the original: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gSq8ZBdSxNU

I just slightly altered the words.
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Thank you for delivery to home
I'm sorry that your fingers are all worn
I felt them once I could have sworn

These are my confused days
Slowly being eaten away
Just one more play for today
Oh but I'm angry at you,but I'm angry at you

Just one more click left to make me feel small
Luck has left me, I have none at all...at aaaaaaall...

Gold!

Slowly destroying your soul
You got the power to know
It's indestructible
Losing your faith in, because you are
Gold
One click and you're bound to return
There's nothing I could've learned
It's indestructible, always believe it

After the faith has gone
I cannot find even a little new line
Remembrin' when I had some free time

It's almost two years ago
Since the Gold arrived at my place
I really thought that I was there on the case
Now I'm fed up with you, I'm fed up with you
Just one more click left to make me feel small
Mapping hasn't helped me, all I ever do is fall.....faaaaaaall...

Gold!

Slowly destroying your soul
You got the power to know
It's indestructible
Losing your faith in, because you are
Gold
One click and you're bound to return
There's nothing I could've learned
It's indestructible, always believe it

I'm going to throw it at the wall
but opening it could leave me standing so tall

Gold!

AWSOME!
So I guess this is your feelings about the gold.
Is it hard waiting?

// M

Ten points for this marvel, with distinction!

Now who is going to do another color?

I have too much time on my hands.

Today I remembered this and decided to get cracking on my own versions of each puzzle I have worked on, as well as the gold.

So, here goes:

O how I knew you would
bring anxiety and worry to this little dude
Your expectancy in this world
Will bring confusion until many hurled

If you think you are
one that will go far
Please think again
for the sake of man

We all are worried
until the competition where your hurried
Though we look to the day
when we can keep you at bay

250 will be solving
though most of which revolving
We wish towards the day
when we can say:

"Although you are bold
And much has been told
Again I might never hold
My finally solved GOLD!"

What do you guys think?
Good? Bad?

I want reviews for whether I should work on the others if this is good enough or not. If not good enough, then I may not bother making others. But if it is good, I will work on the other Revos. Possibly will attempt a poem for ones I have not worked on yet. Silver will be one of those.